Talk:Orion's Belt (film)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 14:31, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
Hi Arsenikk, I'll be glad to take this review. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 14:31, 4 April 2013 (UTC)
Initial comments[edit]
Glad to see you're continuing your work on Svalbard topics! As before, I've made some minor copyedits as I went. Please double-check that I haven't inadvertently introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with.
This looks strong overall, and ripe for promotion. It's well written, well sourced, and appears comprehensive, though I still need to run one or two checks to make sure no major aspects are left out.
Here are a few points I didn't immediately understand well enough to fix:
- "The original ending was created as a compromise resulting in a closing deadline and lack of funding, yet keeping the ending open. " -- I'm not really clear what this means--the compromise resulted in a lack of funding? Why is that?
- "which weaved the storyline better together." -- this opinion should probably be attributed in-text--is there a specific author or critic who feels this way?
- "The complaint was plainly rejected by the " -- what does "plainly" rejected mean here (as opposed to regular "rejected")?
- "to make a film-political decision" -- what does "a film-political decision" mean? -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:00, 6 April 2013 (UTC)
Closing review[edit]
Since it's been a week without response (and the nominator doesn't seem to have been on for a couple of weeks), I'm closing the review for now; though the points above are small ones, I'm unfortunately not in a position to clear them up myself. Though I'm not listing this for now, I hope you'll renominate soon once the small above points are addressed. Thanks again for your work on this. -- Khazar2 (talk) 04:46, 13 April 2013 (UTC)