Talk:Divided Kingdom

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Overhaul[edit]

I think this article needs an overhaul. The last edit had poor grammar and was false (e.g., Sanguines aren't near as angry all the time as Cholerics, whose colour is yellow, and Phlegmatics (Blue Quarter) aren't as spiritual as Melancholics, whose colour is green. Other than that, plot summary is missing/weak, and there is no mention of the integration of psychology. If no one plans to rework the article, then I will.

Radiatrixzero 17:40, 27 June 2007 (UTC)Radiatrixzero[reply]

Overhaul II[edit]

What really needs to be done is (a) shortening the part of the plot summary which is already there, and (b) continuing the section from where the summary breaks off. As Divided Kingdom has rightly been called a picaresque novel, I wonder if it is necessary to follow each and every step the protagonist takes (and to mention each of the characters he meets on his way). Also, there is no hint yet in the article that this is of course also a dystopian novel. After all, the book is mentioned in our List of dystopian literature. <K F> 19:37, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]