User contributions for ToaneeM
A user with 1,073 edits. Account created on 27 April 2015.
30 May 2024
- 13:3913:39, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0 Andy Hunter (EastEnders) Grammar fix. current
28 May 2024
- 22:4322:43, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1 The Spy Who Loved Me (film) →Filming: Added another missing space. current
- 19:4119:41, 28 May 2024 diff hist −364 The Dreaming (album) →Release and commercial performance: Removed irrelevant info outside article's scope. current
- 11:4311:43, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1,003 User talk:Wafflewombat →Ease off excessive Darth Vader editing: Reply Tag: Reply
- 10:3610:36, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1,327 User talk:Wafflewombat →Ease off excessive Darth Vader editing: new section Tag: New topic
20 May 2024
- 16:0416:04, 20 May 2024 diff hist +25 Jack Dempsey's Broadway Restaurant →In popular culture: Better sentence flow. current
18 May 2024
- 08:5708:57, 18 May 2024 diff hist +13 Porpoise Song →In popular culture: Clarification. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
16 May 2024
- 19:0919:09, 16 May 2024 diff hist +7 I²C →Limitations: Resistors were oddly the first on the list, now demoted. Corrected 'low-power' to 'very low-power'. current
15 May 2024
- 15:1515:15, 15 May 2024 diff hist +3 Darth Vader Corrections.
14 May 2024
- 15:4615:46, 14 May 2024 diff hist −13 The Breakfast Club Undid revision 1223760332 by Gorillafan101 (talk) Rv good faith edit. Existing text was better. These character profiles get endlessly toyed with and are better kept simple for this summary. current Tag: Undo
8 May 2024
- 15:4015:40, 8 May 2024 diff hist +22 Darth Vader Minor corrections, kept succinct.
- 11:1311:13, 8 May 2024 diff hist +24 The Man from U.N.C.L.E. →Theme music: Split up clumsy and overly-long sentence into three for clarity.
- 08:0508:05, 8 May 2024 diff hist +3 Electric match →Applications: Spelling and grammar fixes. current
- 06:2706:27, 8 May 2024 diff hist +10 A Momentary Lapse of Reason Undid revision 1222833075 by Ckymusic (talk) Existing text was far better. Tag: Undo
7 May 2024
- 10:1710:17, 7 May 2024 diff hist −35 Return of the Jedi Undid revision 1222680105 by Rangertapper (talk) Existing text was better. Changes added tautology Tag: Undo
6 May 2024
- 13:3313:33, 6 May 2024 diff hist +8 MOS Technology 6502 →Introducing the 6501 and 6502: Improved flow.
5 May 2024
- 15:5415:54, 5 May 2024 diff hist +112 Darth Vader →Profile: Corrections, kept simple. Palpatine doesn't personally encase Vader. Palpatine's lie, Padme's death. Leia and Vader knew of and recognised each other when meeting in 1977, just not they were dad/daughter.
4 May 2024
- 22:5022:50, 4 May 2024 diff hist −81 Return of the Jedi Undid revision 1222266043 by 2601:18C:502:B4B0:A1F4:1DC:9E74:825A (talk) Existing text was better, this is a summary, see WP:PLOT. Removed unnecessary excess detail. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 22:2522:25, 4 May 2024 diff hist −14 Seconds Out Undid revision 1222184591 by 72.240.240.156 (talk) Banks doesn't use a Minimoog full stop, not just here. (Sound On Sound interview Sep 1989: "I've never used the Minimoog in my life - I'm probably the only keyboard player of my generation who hasn't!") current Tag: Undo
3 May 2024
- 21:0821:08, 3 May 2024 diff hist −58 Count Dooku Deleted stray wording, possibly orphaned in previous edits. Shortened long phrase.
30 April 2024
- 18:1318:13, 30 April 2024 diff hist +213 User talk:Sirfurboy →Edits to own post
- 17:1917:19, 30 April 2024 diff hist +702 User talk:Sirfurboy →Edits to own post: new section Tag: New topic
- 15:1515:15, 30 April 2024 diff hist +124 Talk:ZX81 →5 MB HDD peripheral was a hoax Tag: Reverted
27 April 2024
- 08:2208:22, 27 April 2024 diff hist 0 BBC Micro →Market impact: Moved 'ITV Micro' to end of section, after all items about the BBC Micro itself. This is easily the least significant item in the section and its revised position reflects this, rather than top of the list.
26 April 2024
- 10:2710:27, 26 April 2024 diff hist +25 Sunny Balwani Added 'In popular culture'. Tag: Reverted
25 April 2024
- 14:0914:09, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1 A Weekend with Lulu →Critical reception: Typo' fix. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
24 April 2024
- 13:0013:00, 24 April 2024 diff hist +2 A Momentary Lapse of Reason Undid revision 1220525756 by Dubmill (talk) Existing text was correct, does not need any modification. States that music is being performed. Tag: Undo
23 April 2024
- 14:1114:11, 23 April 2024 diff hist +13 Alchemy: Dire Straits Live Additional sections are instrumental, not new choruses/verses. (They're definitely not improvised, they were the same night after night on that tour.)
19 April 2024
- 13:1113:11, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 Talk:Alien (film) →Greatest film in it's genre or all-time?: Typo' fix.
18 April 2024
- 14:2314:23, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 Magic (1978 film) →See also: Restored chronological order.
17 April 2024
- 18:2518:25, 17 April 2024 diff hist −4 Katherine Rose Morley →Personal Life: Removed Wikilink to non-existent page.
15 April 2024
- 12:3512:35, 15 April 2024 diff hist 0 Licence to Kill Undid revision 1219043345 by 96.227.90.97 (talk) Article uses British English. Existing spelling was corrected, restored to remove error.
12 April 2024
- 09:2109:21, 12 April 2024 diff hist −49 Licence to Kill Corrected 'drugs lord' to 'drug lord', removed note. Article uses British English, which uses both 'drug lord' and 'drugs lord' (as per verifying search of UK news) but 'drug lord' is more commonplace ('drugs lord' is not, same as 'drugs dealer'). (If you disagree, please do not edit war. Instead, discuss on _article_ talk page.) Tag: Manual revert
9 April 2024
- 20:4220:42, 9 April 2024 diff hist −44 Microcontroller Removed excessive and unnecessary text. Reordered memory into popularity order.
- 20:2820:28, 9 April 2024 diff hist −2 The Empire Strikes Back Undid revision 1218113479 by Darkwarriorblake (talk) Restored previous text, was better and more representative. Tag: Undo
4 April 2024
- 13:3613:36, 4 April 2024 diff hist 0 BBC BASIC →Platforms and versions: Was "second Zilog Z80 processor", as if it had a first Z80. Now the unambiguous "Zilog Z80 second processor".
2 April 2024
- 19:4619:46, 2 April 2024 diff hist −2 High-dynamic-range television Section 1 heading levels unnecessarily deep. Demoted 'Preservation of content creator intent' to level 2 heading.
- 14:2714:27, 2 April 2024 diff hist +1 The Spy Who Loved Me (film) Undid revision 1216835732 by 2403:6200:8840:4840:CCB4:7FBF:F9C9:ED3D (talk) Rv edit. Existing text was correct. Do not repeatedly edit 'tank' to 'pool' in different Bond articles using different IP addresses, the changes are wrong and will be revoked. Do not edit war. Tag: Undo
- 14:2614:26, 2 April 2024 diff hist +1 Live and Let Die (film) Undid revision 1216835799 by 2403:6200:8840:4840:CCB4:7FBF:F9C9:ED3D (talk) Rv edit. Existing text was correct. Do not repeatedly edit 'tank' to 'pool' in different Bond articles using different IP addresses, the changes are wrong and will be revoked. Do not edit war. Tag: Undo
- 14:2414:24, 2 April 2024 diff hist +7 Licence to Kill Restored last version by F1fans. Existing text was correct. Tag: Manual revert
- 11:2811:28, 2 April 2024 diff hist +45 Micralign →Micralign 100: Atari VCS used 6507, not 6502. Kept reference very simple, not a VCS life story. current
29 March 2024
- 11:4311:43, 29 March 2024 diff hist +1 Victoria Beckham Made 'married to David Beckham' a separate intro paragraph. Was previously hard to spot at end of preceding long paragraph. He marriage and married name is significant enough to her brand and identity.
28 March 2024
- 13:2113:21, 28 March 2024 diff hist −175 Return of the Jedi Undid revision 1216001258 by 49.151.128.80 (talk) Existing text was better, restored. Revision is unnecessary detail in an intro summary. External info was added: film does not state 'one year after' anywhere. (Do not edit war. Discuss proposed changes first on article Talk page.) Tag: Undo
26 March 2024
- 12:0312:03, 26 March 2024 diff hist +395 Talk:Alien (film) →Error
- 09:5609:56, 26 March 2024 diff hist +51 Alien (film) Undid revision 1215610988 by Pale Autumn (talk) Reinstated correct change. Do not revoke or edit war. Discuss changes on article talk page first. Tag: Undo
24 March 2024
- 23:1923:19, 24 March 2024 diff hist +121 Talk:Alien (film) →Error
- 23:1723:17, 24 March 2024 diff hist +43 Alien (film) →Plot: Corrected alien message description, as per film dialogue.
23 March 2024
- 10:3310:33, 23 March 2024 diff hist −150 GoldenEye Undid revision 1215106094 by 2001:4450:453C:8700:58A5:CCC5:4E20:D160 (talk) Removed plot bloat as per WP:PLOT. Existing summary was sufficient. Tag: Undo
12 March 2024
- 14:0014:00, 12 March 2024 diff hist +3 Shaun of the Dead Restored to last edit by Nivamp. Article on British film uses British English.
3 March 2024
- 09:3809:38, 3 March 2024 diff hist +2 Daniel Pearce (singer) →2021: Genesis tour: Corrected tense: 'has' to 'had'. Simplified sentence.
