User contributions for 38.49.72.17

3 June 2024

• 05:3405:34, 3 June 2024 diff hist −16‎ Sultans of Swing ‎ →‎Recording: rmv peacockish "influential" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 June 2024

• 05:2005:20, 1 June 2024 diff hist −9‎ Navy bean ‎ rmv editorial "even" per MOS:OPED; rmv obstructive link pipe from bean pies current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 May 2024

• 18:3818:38, 31 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Handelsbanken ‎ update verb tense current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3107:31, 31 May 2024 diff hist +23‎ Apocalypse Now ‎ →‎Alternative and varied endings: "current" is meaningless, should be replaced with the year of the referenced Blu-ray release, per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2407:24, 31 May 2024 diff hist +23‎ Apocalypse Now ‎ →‎Theatrical release: "now" is meaningless, should be replaced by a specific reference date Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 May 2024

• 08:0408:04, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Angus Young ‎ rmv errant hyphen between "all" and "time", which here is a noun phrase, not a modifier Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:3507:35, 30 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ John Fogerty ‎ →‎Personal life: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 May 2024

• 17:0117:01, 29 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Walloon alphabet ‎ typo current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2806:28, 29 May 2024 diff hist −36‎ Marilyn vos Savant ‎ →‎Fermat's Last Theorem: rmv instructional and presumptuous "it is pertinent to note that" per MOS:NOTE; rmv editorial "indeed" per MOS:OPED
• 02:4702:47, 29 May 2024 diff hist −7‎ Richard Dimbleby ‎ →‎Controversy and comedy: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 May 2024

• 23:5923:59, 27 May 2024 diff hist +14‎ Bob Newhart ‎ →‎Early life and education: rmv unjustified italics and unnecessarily distracting abbreviation from name of oldest sister's religious order Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:4823:48, 27 May 2024 diff hist −8‎ Bob Newhart ‎ correct editorial puffery "was honored with" to neutral "received" per MOS:PEA, MOS:OPED, etc Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:1613:16, 27 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ YouTube poop ‎ rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per MOS:ANDOR Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

26 May 2024

• 08:0808:08, 26 May 2024 diff hist −29‎ Holly Springs ‎ rmv "Holly Springs, Arkansas": a dab page is for disambiguating existing WP articles, not for suggesting articles to be created current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 May 2024

• 03:4903:49, 25 May 2024 diff hist −30‎ Norman Bel Geddes ‎ rmv instructional and presumptuous "Notably" per MOS:NOTE; rmv peacockish "blockbuster" and "landmark" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:3901:39, 25 May 2024 diff hist +62‎ Pall Mall (cigarette) ‎ What does "adopted" before the third pronunciation mean? current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 May 2024

• 18:1118:11, 23 May 2024 diff hist +6‎ Absorption refrigerator ‎ →‎History: ce current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4715:47, 23 May 2024 diff hist +23‎ Dentin hypersensitivity ‎ →‎Home treatment: "in recent years" is uselessly ambiguous, per MOS:RELTIME current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:4015:40, 23 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Dentin hypersensitivity ‎ correct "most" to "more" when comparing only two objects Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:3315:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +23‎ Potassium nitrate ‎ →‎Pharmacology: "Recently" is uselessly ambiguous, per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 May 2024

• 05:0305:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist −165‎ Quarter Pounder ‎ →‎Product description: rmv questionable, unsourced statement about mustardless QPs in NYC current
• 01:0301:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist +27‎ Chia ‎ →‎Plants: add that Salvia hispanica is what's used in Chia Pet products current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 May 2024

• 18:4518:45, 19 May 2024 diff hist +677‎ Talk:Quarter Pounder ‎ →‎Quarter Pounder vs Quarter Pounder With Cheese: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic

18 May 2024

• 03:4703:47, 18 May 2024 diff hist −4‎ FODMAP ‎ rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per MOS:ANDOR current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 May 2024

• 16:5316:53, 17 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ Bleisure travel ‎ correct ambiguous "this year" to "that year" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 May 2024

• 22:5322:53, 16 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ That's All (1952 song) ‎ link bumper music current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5022:50, 16 May 2024 diff hist +29‎ It Must Be Him (song) ‎ add English lyricist to intro current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:3908:39, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ Mack David ‎ →‎Life and career: add dash to avoid suggesting that he received eight nominations for "Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Boo" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:2207:22, 16 May 2024 diff hist −31‎ Roundhouse ‎ →‎United States: only one active Wikilink per dab page entry current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:2802:28, 16 May 2024 diff hist +185‎ Good Humor ‎ →‎History: this section is far too colloquial, reads like a newspaper feature or personal reminiscence—should be rewritten as an encyclopedia article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:1902:19, 16 May 2024 diff hist +9‎ Good Humor ‎ →‎1920s: clarify that "the first set" refers to bells Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0602:06, 16 May 2024 diff hist −19‎ Good Humor ‎ correct "with" to more idiomatic "by" following "started"; rmv incongruous link pipe Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 May 2024

• 19:5919:59, 15 May 2024 diff hist +4‎ Area code 917 ‎ link grandfathering Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4604:46, 15 May 2024 diff hist −25‎ Petra ‎ rmv peacockish "famously" and "famous" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:1501:15, 15 May 2024 diff hist −10‎ The Cadfael Chronicles ‎ →‎Cadfael novels: rmv instructional and presumptuous "Note that" per MOS:NOTE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 01:0801:08, 15 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ The Cadfael Chronicles ‎ rmv unjustified and distracting quotation marks from pen name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 May 2024

• 19:2919:29, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Shrewsbury ‎ →‎Saxon: add missing "the"; correct biased "claimed" to neutral "said" per MOS:SAY Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:2619:26, 14 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Shrewsbury ‎ →‎Roman and Post-Roman: rmv commas from restrictive appositive: John Wacher is not the only historian Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5418:54, 14 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ 1,1,1,2-Tetrafluoroethane ‎ →‎History and environmental impacts: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:4216:42, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ White chocolate ‎ →‎Regulations: correct "or" to "and" in subset list Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 16:3716:37, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ White chocolate ‎ →‎Modern version: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 May 2024

• 20:3520:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist −10‎ Ice cream cone ‎ →‎20th century: prune verbose and redundant "would later start [...] a few years later" to "started [...] a few years later" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 May 2024

• 05:2605:26, 8 May 2024 diff hist +33‎ Konstantin Kisin ‎ italicize and correct link to Question Time Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 May 2024

• 19:3619:36, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Google Pixel ‎ correct "similar as" to "similar to" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:3111:31, 7 May 2024 diff hist −7‎ Aaron Montgomery Ward ‎ →‎Public life: the fight for Grant Park: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:1609:16, 7 May 2024 diff hist −6‎ Dare (band) ‎ →‎Lineup reshuffle: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:5608:56, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Audi A8 ‎ correct "both ... or ..." to "either ... or ..."; rmv incongruous mid-clause em dash Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 May 2024

• 13:0113:01, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ Swiss Steam Laundry Building ‎ correct "located at Baltimore" to "located in Baltimore" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:5205:52, 6 May 2024 diff hist +5‎ Semi-trailer truck ‎ →‎Europe: clarify that "COE" abbreviates "cab over engine" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2504:25, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ V8 engine ‎ →‎Motorsport: correct "the 2014–present seasons" to "the 2014 and later seasons" per MOS:RELTIME Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit