User contributions for 135.180.159.168

14 May 2024

• 22:4622:46, 14 May 2024 diff hist −21‎ Ironclad warship ‎ →‎Turrets, batteries, and barbettes: in former construction, "nevertheless" was illogical. current Tag: Visual edit
• 22:4322:43, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Ironclad warship ‎ →‎Turrets, batteries, and barbettes: corrected run-on sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5719:57, 14 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ First Battle of Bull Run ‎ →‎Prelude to battle: grammatically-incorrect orphan comma removed current Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5419:54, 14 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ First Battle of Bull Run ‎ →‎McDowell's plan and initial movements in the Manassas Campaign: the correct pronoun for the object, "force," is "which," not "who." Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5019:50, 14 May 2024 diff hist −1‎ First Battle of Bull Run ‎ →‎McDowell's plan and initial movements in the Manassas Campaign: p Removed grammatically incorrect comma. Tag: Visual edit

8 April 2024

• 23:1823:18, 8 April 2024 diff hist −1‎ Friar Park ‎ →‎Overview: orphan comma Tag: Visual edit

25 March 2024

• 17:3617:36, 25 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ Wag the Dog ‎ →‎Plot: corrected punctuation Tag: Visual edit

7 March 2024

• 18:4018:40, 7 March 2024 diff hist +4‎ Dakota High School (Fargo, North Dakota) ‎ →‎History current

26 January 2024

• 21:2821:28, 26 January 2024 diff hist −3‎ Luke Perry ‎ →‎Beginnings: removed incorrect information per https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000580/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1 Tags: Reverted Visual edit

22 January 2024

• 23:0923:09, 22 January 2024 diff hist +22‎ Pericles ‎ →‎First year of the war (431 BC): corrected misspelling: prytanies to prytaneis. See https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prytaneis. Tag: Visual edit